In English Class
January 8, 2008
In the English class last week, Jimmy taught the English song “We are the world.” He noticed a student named Jacky was sleeping. As a result, Jimmy was unhappy. In Jacky’s dream, he dreamed that he was an English Teacher, He did his best for his students. But still a lot of students fell sleep in class. At that time, he thought ”I taught so well. Why are they still sleepy? That’s why the class’s performed so badly academically. That’s so bad.” Jimmy yelled “Wake up.” And Jimmy said ”I taught so well. Why are they still sleepy? That’s why the class’s performed so badly academically. That’s so bad.” Jacky thought “The view I might saw in somewhere.” Then, Jacky start to listen Jimmy’s English class.
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January 14, 2008 at 10:03 pm
Dear Jacky:
You did a fine job except for the sentence,”The view I might saw,,,” Please correct the mistake.